Saturday, January 18, 2014

My 2nd Novel: Hidden Secrets; Chapter 8

Hidden Secrets
Chapter 8


Look at my pretty eggs! My neighbor's hens are laying enough that her son has opened his own egg selling business. I jumped at the chance for fresh--really fresh--eggs. It's been ages since we had a little backyard coop and yummy eggs. Another bonus is these arrived at my front door and they're already clean! If you've never had hens, you don't know how wonderful that is! I know this has nothing to do with my story, but I wanted to share it anyway! 

Wait--it does apply! Every manuscript needs cleaning up before it lands in the reader's lap. I use my spell check, delete key, etc., but will still miss a few things here and there. Sorry. Other than that, you're getting a nice novel with very few errors. And yes, in case you didn't know, different varieties of hens lay different colors of eggs. My chapters are kind of like this carton of eggs: each is a little different than the rest, and some are surprising. Enjoy!

 
Hidden Secrets
Leona Palmer Haag
 
Chapter 8



 It felt good sitting in an air conditioned jet and looking down on a thin layer of clouds below. There was no sign of Mother Earth and the bedlam plaguing it in spots. Nick stretched his aching shoulder muscles and focused on his hands—calloused and skinned on every knuckle. Blood coursed through veins near the surface. He was amazed he was alive. His face was still sunburned, especially the tops of his ears, and every muscle in his body hurt, but other than that he was fine. A true survivor.
Nick picked up the short plastic tumbler in front of him and sipped the coke on ice. Three cubes to be exact. A treat he hadn't had in weeks. He set the drink down and pulled his sunglasses from his shirt pocket and held them up. Spotted with sea water. He took his napkin and rubbed the lenses clean.
Satisfied, Nick shoved the dark glasses back into his pocket. He already knew the faces of the people seated behind him. A stout woman in her fifties. A balding man in his thirties who was trying to hide the widening expanse of flesh on the top of his head. Two little kids with their mother: one distracted by a woman with dangling earrings and the other distracting her mother with whining demands. Several businessmen. A couple probably returning from their honeymoon. Students. Dozens of various nationalities. Some rich. Some poor. Mostly middle to upper class.
Nick patted his pocket. He didn't need to use his sunglasses as a mirror to double check the passengers. He'd seen nothing suspicious while waiting in the airport before boarding. Seated first class, he'd casually observed each passenger and noticed nothing unusual as they made their way down the aisle past him.
He leaned back in his seat and slowly released his breath. He was almost home. He could relax. The past sixteen days could become a memory he'd never have to live through again. Ahead of him lay nearly two whole weeks of vacation with Jenn and Katie—with only one slight hitch. Jenn would be gone for five long days stolen from the middle—attending a training camp of sorts while he was alone with Katie.
Mitchell had guaranteed Nick would have ten days at home, possibly a few more. He had turned around and promised it to Jenn—except it was the other way around. Jenn had asked him to take time off to watch their daughter—or she'd refuse to go to the training. A flat out no! Absolutely not! Dream on! That type of refusal. Nick had laid that one in his boss' lap and reminded him his wife deserved some self-preservation training. It had worked.
Nick closed his eyes and imagined uninterrupted time with his wife—except for those annoying five days stolen from the center. They'd fill Katie's wading pool up with water and let her splash around until she begged to get out. Jenn would put on her little pink bikini, the one she'd bought in Florida before she got pregnant with Katie, and would join their daughter. Together the beautiful girls in his life would try to drench him as he sipped a tall iced tea at a safe distance. He'd threaten to dowse them with his drink—ten or twelve ice cubes and all—if they though Katie's beach bucket would help.
Nick's daydream was interrupted when he realized it was January and it probably wouldn’t be warm enough to play in the wading pool in Dallas. He opened his eyes. He'd ask his boss if the department's training pool was available. Jenn had told him more than once that Katie was a water bug and needed swimming lessons before she drowned herself on accident. Her work schedule didn't allow her enough time to enroll her in lessons. His work schedule was prohibitive too.
Of course, Mitchell would give him a twisted half-smile over the request. He'd shrug, and almost give him hope, then he would frown and say something like, "We're out to save the world, not turn the department's dependent children into fish." His boss would turn and walk away meaning the final answer was no.
Nick smiled. He'd give it a try. It didn't hurt to pass out a few new ideas at the office. Maybe he'd let his boss know he was human and had ordinary needs—like take care of his own kid every now and then and do things a full time father did.
Nick's next thought made him smile even more. Maybe he'd pack up Katie and fly up to Maryland to join Jenn. He'd take Katie sightseeing during the day but they'd be together as a family in the evening. It would be like a real vacation. Katie would love the hotel swimming pool and he'd love cuddling his wife all night!
He glanced as his watch. In less than four hours Jenn would be in his arms and the life he lived for would begin. No bad guys. No guns. Lots of baby chatter but no foreign language. Jenn would make her famous lasagna from scratch and toss a salad with lettuce clean enough to eat. She'd add fresh mushrooms. Maybe they'd invite Matt and Monica over for dinner. Jenn would light candles. Matt wasn’t totally dense—he’d get the hint and drag Monica off early.
That night he and Jenn would tuck Katie into bed and then they'd cuddle on the couch. Jenn would brush her dark auburn hair behind her shoulder and give him a crooked smile. "What are you thinking, babe?" he'd ask, catching the twinkle in her eye.
"Two weeks," she'd whisper.
"I hope you're not thinking about me having time to mow the lawn or fix something," he'd say, being half serious.
She'd roll her eyes. "Of course not! Two weeks of…" She'd lean over and kiss him. Long. Passionately.
Once the kiss ended, he'd pull away, but only slightly, and say, "Of what?" as if he was clueless. He knew his wife well enough to know she had something up her sleeve. He hoped it was just a little list of things to do while she was gone—like get the oil changed in the cars, edge the lawn, trim the hedge, fix the lock on the gate and clean out the rain gutters. But while she was still in town he wanted to simply be with her and forget about everything else. They’d watch a few movies. He’d take her out to dinner. They'd take Katie to the zoo. Alone, they'd stay up late at night, and every morning they'd sleep in.
Nick would enjoy his family. Spend all of his time with his wife. Do anything and everything she wanted, even push the shopping cart for her for ten hours in a row and say, "Uh-huh," with a smile and nod if she asked if he liked something. He'd turn his cell phone off and pretend the world around them had disappeared. And it would. He'd hold his wife close. They'd cuddle and kiss and pretend they were newlyweds again.

End Chapter 8


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