Friday, January 17, 2014

My 2nd Novel: Hidden Secrets; Chapter 4

My 2nd Novel: Hidden Secrets; Chapter 4

When I'm not writing I'm doing something else. Here I'm resting in the middle of staining my wood floors last fall. That job took as long as writing a book, but was a thousand times quicker than editing a first draft. I'm so glad I found a good WIP of this novel. I love creating, but I'm delighted I can keep the creation of editing this novel to a minimum!




Hidden Secrets
Leona Palmer Haag

Chapter 4


Jenn wanted nothing more than to stretch out on the bed and sleep for a week. When she awoke it would be Saturday and Nick would be walking through the door with his bag in one hand and his arms stretched out to greet her and Katie. In a one-arm giant bear hug he'd lift them both off their feet and swing them around. He'd toss in dozens of warm kisses for good measure.
It was a wonderful daydream but wasn't going to happen. Jenn plopped down in the middle of her bed, sitting cross-legged, and began folding clothes. First Katie's tiny sun dresses, shorts and tops. Next a pile of her own undies, cammies and blouses. Finally she reached for the towels—the easy stuff she liked saving for last. She flipped them out and as they came back at her, she caught them in a neat fold. Stacks grew. Last came kitchen towels, hand towels and washcloths.
Wearily, Jenn slid off the bed and loaded the laundry basket with tidy piles and pulled it onto her hip. She started unloading her wares in the kitchen, filling the drawer with dishcloths. The linen closet came next. She tip-toed into Katie's bedroom and put her things away without waking her. She returned to her bedroom and grabbed a stack of clothes from the foot of the bed and opened her top drawer and set a neat pile of undies inside next to Nick's short stack of boxers.
That's when loneliness consumed her. Not one piece of laundry had been Nick's. Not one sock, shirt or pair of shorts. He'd been gone for nearly two weeks. She'd washed all the dirty clothes he'd left behind days ago.
Jenn sat on the edge of her bed and frowned. More than anything in the world she wished her husband sold life insurance and was at a meeting in Milwaukee. He'd be telling a business client he had an important phone call to make and would excuse himself. He'd pull out his cell phone while riding the elevator up to his room in some swanky hotel. She'd answer before he got to his floor. He'd say, "Hey, Jenn, I've been thinking about you, honey. How are you and my little baby cuddle bear doing tonight?"
Jenn choked back a sob. She was doing terrible. Her imagination took off in another direction and ran wild. Nick was probably in some flea-infested dive someone claimed was a hotel. He'd be wishing for air conditioning, a decent meal and something to take away the itch from all the no-see-um's that had crawled under his skin and were eating him alive.
Or maybe he was really entertaining some curvy senorita who thought he'd be her lover when all he wanted was to find some way to get her to take him home so he could meet her evil drug-dealing brother so he could discover some piece of information about him that would put him away for a long time—perhaps forever.
Jenn wondered if Nick was really sitting in some ritzy resort hotel on the twenty-first floor with his laptop open as he surfed, trying to find a company that could take him and his buddies deep sea fishing in the morning. Of course, he'd come home from wherever he was in the Bahamas and tell her he'd been roughing it and eating raw coconut—but his tan would testify he'd been having fun.
Jenn let sobs escape.
One.
Two.
Dozens.
Her shoulders shook. If Nick were home he'd take out the trash, double check the locks, saunter down the hall and lean on the door frame and smile at her. "What is that smile for?" she'd ask.
He'd shrug. "Just looking at you. Thinking maybe you're ready to abandon those clothes and call it a night."
She'd hand him a pile of his clean shirts and say, "Hang these up, baby, and I'll get the light."
He'd laugh and say, "I don't think you heard me right."
Jenn slowly got up and walked to the closet and opened Nick's side. "Nope, I didn't hear a thing, except an over active imagination," she muttered as she stared at several bare hangers. She slid the door shut and said a few choice words under her breath, feeling guilty because she'd mostly cleaned up her language years ago. She opened her side of the closet. The hamper was empty. Nick wouldn't fill it until he got home, which felt like an eternity away. She stripped and tossed her clothes into the hamper and slammed the lid shut. She pulled her nightgown from the shelf and pulled it on over her head. There wasn't anything left to do that night but go to bed.
Alone.
Again.
Like she did more than she wanted to. More than she ever planned to.

End Chapter 4

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