Saturday, January 18, 2014

My 2nd Novel: Hidden Secrets; Chapter 14

Hidden Secrets
Chapter 14



One morning while working on my laptop my little Grand stole my reading glasses during a pause and laughed because he thought he "looked like me."


Hidden Secrets
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 14




"Now let me get this straight, Jose Miguel de Carlos y Santitas, you happen to be in the wrong room?" Monica looked at the ID she'd found in the man's wallet to make sure she had his name right, then looked back at him. "You were looking for a Mr. Halterman, but this is not his room and you're terribly sorry about interrupting us?"
The man seated in the chair, and held in place by a pair of Monica's best nylons, slightly nodded his head.
Monica rose from the corner of the credenza where she'd lightly perched and began pacing the room from the door to the chair and back. Her face was in deep thought. "So what room were you originally looking for?" she asked, stopping in front of him.
"Twenty-two."
"This is room twenty-two," Monica said with a nod.
"Floor eighteen," Jose added.
Monica returned to her perch. "This if floor nineteen."
"Si. Yes. Floor nineteen."
"So you were looking for floor nineteen?"
"No. No, senora. Floor eighteen."
A light rap on the door stopped Monica before she could proceed with the interrogation. She slid to her feet. "Room service, I suppose?"
"I think so," Matt said, waving his gun at Jose Miguel de Carlos y Santitas and adding, "Are you going to behave for our guest?"
Jose's eyes narrowed as he stared at the gun, but he nodded.
"Go ahead and get it, sugar. Our visitor has promised to present himself properly."
"Is that so?" Monica asked, pausing and searching the man’s face.
Jose didn't answer with anything more than a nod.
"Honey, use that little thing in your hand if he acts up," Monica said before turning toward the door.
Monica pulled the door open and ushered in a man dressed in black pants and a black shirt under a crisp  white jacket. A red tie at his neck, white gloves on his hands, and ultra-shiny black shoes finished his ensemble. The polished silver cart he pushed held two dome-shaped fine china covers over dinner plates.
Monica directed him to where she wanted the cart placed—not far in front of Jose—then lifted the lid from one plate. She stabbed a shrimp with a tiny fork and dipped it in cocktail sauce and nibbled off the end. "Honey, do you want some?" she asked.
"No, go ahead. I ate not too long ago. Besides, I'm a little busy," Matt replied.
"It's yummy," Monica said after her second bite. She speared an asparagus tip next, then sampled the fresh pineapple. "This is fantastic," she drawled.
"What's on the other plate?" Matt asked.
Monica threw her head back and laughed. "Honey, you know me! I ordered dessert too. Give me a minute. I'm still half famished. I'll share with you."
Matt grinned and leaned back in his seat and watched Jose as he ignored his beautiful wife. The waiter patiently waited. Finally Monica took the linen napkin and dabbed at her pretty fire-engine red lips. She reached for the second plate cover and carefully lifted it. The man's eyes flickered to the cart, then stopped as if frozen.
"Senor, please assist me," Monica said, flicking her long fingers at the waiter, then pointing at Jose as if inviting the waiter to approach their prisoner.
"Si," the waiter said with a slight bow. The waiter first lifted a small pad of ink and proceeded to fingerprint the intruder. Next tweezers plucked a black hair from his scalp and placed it in a tiny plastic bag marked for DNA sampling. A small electronic box was turned on and he scanned the man's clothing, finding a tiny blade in the tip of each shoe, but no other metal.
As the agent in gloves worked, Nick turned back to his computer and glanced over the information he'd sent moments before about the encounter, then proceeded to send off the fingerprints. A moment later he said, "Sugar, you might like to see this."
Monica leaned over his shoulder and smiled. She straightened and turned toward their prisoner. "Mr. Gonzales, it's a pleasure meeting you."
He blinked and visibly swallowed hard.
Monica resumed her perch on the credenza and said, "You can begin answering questions now, or it can wait if you'd prefer, but now would be preferable for all of us." She paused, waiting for a reply that never came. She finally added, "What will it be?"
Gonzales remained silent, but his baby finger twitched nervously.
Monica glanced over her shoulder and watched the waiter for a minute as he placed a drop of murky fluid from the syringe on several test strips. "That can wait, she said," holding up her hand.
"Si, Senora," the waiter replied, slipping the rest of the strips back into their containers and stepping aside.
"Gonzales?" Monica asked, returning her attention to their captive.
A second later Matt's hand flashed around and he pulled his trigger. The waiter fell with a thud to the carpet. "Was that necessary, sugar?" Monica sweetly asked in her best drawl.
"Absolutely," Matt said, standing up and stretching. He stepped past his wife in her black and red silk suit and stooped down and pried a gun out of the waiter's hand. He pulled the clip from it and set it on the credenza beside his wife, then kissed her pretty lips. "I don’t think you saw that. I'll get fingerprints from him later." He returning to his seat. “Reliable help is hard to find.”
"Thank you, sugar," Monica cooed in adoration.
Gonzales swallowed several times, perspiration dripped from his hairline, making its way down one cheek, and he sunk back in his chair.
"You don't look very well, senor," Monica cooed. "Shall we talk about it now?"
Gonzales frantically shook his head, then let his chin sink to his chest.
"Honey, just answer a few questions," she gently coaxed.
"Mr. R." Gonzales whispered after a long pause.
Monica and Matt waited quietly for more.
"Narcocorrido."
“Where?" Monica prompted after a long silence.
"Ciudad Mexico."
Monica glanced at Matt, catching his eager eye. "Details," she coaxed, knowing Matt was subtly catching everything on his phone’s video recorder.
In barely a whisper Gonzales named a band and song, then hung his head as if he'd pronounced his own death sentence. Monica waited patiently for more information without saying a word. A skill that had earned her bragging rights of pulling vital information from those she interrogated. Her mere presence often sent shivers down their spines and words from their lips.
"Listen," Gonzales whispered. "Listen carefully. Slowly."
"And then what?" Monica whispered in reply.
"A name."
"Anything more?" she asked after a long pause.
Gonzales shook his head, then added, "A date. A place. In code." He whispered the title of another song and his hands clenched and loosened as sweat poured from his face. He finally looked up with anguished eyes and said, "My sister. I have given you information. In return, I beg you to rescue Carmen."
"Rescue?" Monica gently asked.
Gonzales' frantic eyes shifted to Matt, then back to Monica. "I must appear dead or you cannot act. I must be dead to Mr. R or Carmen will die."
"I'll arrange for that," Monica drawled in a soothing voice. "How would you like to die?"
Gonzales' sweat increased. "I don't want to die. Please, senora. I don’t want to die, do you understand? Only make it appear as if I died, but don’t make me dead."
"But death is much easier and more convincing if it's real, honey."
Gonzales gave Monica a wild look. "Please. I will do anything for you. For Carmen. Anything."
Monica looked as if she was considering it. Finally she nodded. "Very well. How do you wish to die? What is your preference?"
Gonzales nodded toward the syringe. "That."
"What does it do?" Monica asked glancing at the needle, then back at him.
Gonzales looked up with desperate dark eyes and whispered. "Death. Painful. Terrible agony. Foul smell. Very foul smell. But don’t make me dead with that!"
Monica nodded. "Consider it done." She glanced at Matt and drawled, "Honey, be a sweetheart for me and kill Gonzales."

End Chapter 14

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