Saturday, January 18, 2014

My 2nd Novel: Hidden Secrets; Chapter 7

Hidden Secrets
Chapter 7


Life is filled with discoveries. Today I discovered that I'm the one bugged by turning my bedroom into a paint studio, not my husband. He has plenty of room on his side of the bed and hasn't even come close to stubbing his toes. Me? I like sitting on the little antique sofa my grandfather made while I put on my shoes. Now that I can't, I'm bugged, and painting much quicker than I predicted. I've added a couple more coats of paint and the sofa table will be ready to move out to the great room tonight. Oh, the wonders of owning a flexible house! My great room will become the paint studio while I refinish the top. Now it's time to discover what happens next in...

 
Hidden Secrets
Leona Palmer Haag
 
Chapter 7


A branch snapped near Natalie's head, bringing her fully back to her senses. She'd dozed off—at least halfway. Now she was completely awake and relieved to know she was still alive—if only for a few more minutes. Every inch of her body ached. Stiff from sitting. Stiff from deep-down fear. Stiff from being totally helpless.
Her ears focused on every sound and the depth of silence surrounding her, but nothing moved except distant waves caressing sand. Then she heard faint movement. Another rat? The drunk woman had returned? No. No one was nearby and rats had no ability to suddenly go still and quiet. They scurried on as if unconcerned with their surroundings—little rulers of the dark. Drunk women swayed and tripped, unaware of the mess littering their wake. Most likely the man had returned. She felt it in her bones. Her fear deepened, turning blood red behind her eyelids.
She slowly inhaled. With purpose. And she caught it. The hind of body odor. Easy to acquire in the humid climate, and hard to hide. So common. Very distinct from rotting foliage and jungle decay. Different than wilting flowers, dripping sap, stale pools of water and the ocean spray. Human odors didn’t resemble animals, most of which cleansed themselves regularly. The man had definitely returned.
Natalie flinched her fists into tight balls. She knew her life hung in the balance. But she was prepared. She'd tuck, roll and run—and like a greased pig at the Iowa State Fair, she'd slip through the grasp of her pursuers. No, she’d pause to claim a poisoned dart, a prized possession to stop the man, and then she'd be free. She hoped. It was her only chance.
Either that, or she'd be dead.
Three.
Two.
One!
Natalie lunged. Suddenly the stars went out. Pitch blackness crashed around her like thunder. Hail pounded, except it oddly sounded like sharp spikes on metal. Arrows on a shield? And there was a crushing weight upon her. Before she could fully identify what was happening, a hand circled her throat and clung tight as she was wrenched to her feet. The lines holding her were now tangled. Tight. Biting. She was jerked forward. Dragged.
Natalie's foot caught and she fell forward, sharply hitting her elbow on the rock wall. Hot pain shot through her and an even hotter word spilled out. She tried to gain her footing but fell again, this time smacking her forehead on something hard like a knee or elbow. She cried out a second time and a hand grabbed her arm and yanked her into the air. A crash of metal, wood and stone reverberated behind her as she was dragged into the jungle trailing remnants of cut lines.
Natalie could only envision herself being captured by King Kong as she clawed at the hands holding her while her knees sank to the ground and bumped and smashed on protruding roots as she was dragged along. If she had her gun… She wished for a knife. Much quieter. Just as deadly. Just as quick. She'd disembowel her assailant and break free. She'd leave him in his gore as she ran for the sea. She'd escape. She'd go home.
She'd come back.
She’d clean house. She'd start with Ricardo and finish with the cabana!
She kicked. Hard. With every ounce of force she had and then some. Like an atomic bomb detonating. She knew she wasn’t quite reaching the vital spots she wanted, but was coming awfully close.
"Girl, if you don't settle down and get your feet moving in the right direction you'll get us both killed. And if Katie is an only child, thanks to you, you'll have to hide forever from Jenn!"
Natalie went limp. "Nick?" she gasped.
"Shut up and get moving. We've got to get out of here—and fast!"
Natalie tried to get her feet working, but they were still tangled in twine. "Why didn't you tell me it was you? Take a guess at how I planned to take you out."
"I already know it was with a hairpin. Now maybe you ought to think about how you'll help me out instead."
They broke into a clearing and Nick pushed Natalie against a tree for support. Her body, still tangled, lost its balance and tumbled to the ground. Nick knelt before her and worked on the lashings. "What have you got?" he asked, completely business like.
"Besides a headache and a cobweb of twine trailing me like a well-lit path?"
Nick quietly chuckled, but still sounded tense. He pulled out a knife and went to work on the bands.
"I've got a broken, bruised and tattered reputation," she said as she yanked a wad of twine free. Nick quickly glanced at her. Natalie could see he needed a shave. His eyes were sunken in dark holes. Maybe it was the night, but maybe he'd escaped from something similar. She had no way of knowing and even if she asked, he probably would never tell. She went back to working herself free.
"About half a mile down the coast there's a safe passage through the reef. They brought in a boat yesterday. A shipment," Nick said.
Natalie groaned as she worked her wrists to free them. "I've been searching north and all along the opening was south?"
Nick glanced at her again. In the darkness she more felt his look than saw it. She hoped he could see better in the dark than she could and his knife didn't miss its mark and slice her instead of the ropes around her ankles. He looked back at her feet. "Looks that way. They unloaded guns, drugs and slaves."
"Slaves? What work is there to be done here? This island has a near zero population and…"
"Children. Mere kids. Not plantation laborers. They won't be here for long."
Natalie groaned, then felt her hands finally burst free. She leaned over and began helping Nick work on the knots holding her ankles shackled as she gave details she'd learned. "The boss is a ruthless man named Ricardo Carratix. The cabana above that luxurious patio I was marooned on serves as a satellite to his headquarters on top of the hill. Carlo is one of his henchmen. I believe he's deadly but not altogether bright. There's another passage through the reef directly out from the patio, but I suspect it's not accessible except at high tide. I haven't learned much more. Sorry."
"Two ports?" Nick said.
Natalie nodded in the darkness. "Possibly three. I swear there's got to be another one north. I overheard them say…"
Nick pressed his hand over Natalie's mouth. She heard it too. Hounds. Not far away. They weren't tracking wild boar. Natalie wildly looked around in the inky blackness, but darkness couldn't hide them from dogs. The sea was their only hope. "I can swim," she whispered.
Nick grabbed her wrist and dragged her forward, leaving a nest of twine behind. "All night?"
A palm frond slapped her across the face leaving a stinging welt. "Yes, and for days at a time."
"With sharks?"
"And without."
With her feet finally under her, they ran, heedless of sharp palm fronds slicing their arms and legs leaving smears of blood in their wake. Natalie paused only long enough to shed the long skirt threatening to trip her. It would only drag her to the bottom of the ocean once it was wet anyway.
For the first time in hours Natalie praised her string of returning good luck when they plunged into the black ocean where only starlight glimmered because the moon had already drown in its inky depths. Now if only they could hide as easily, then resurface safely when daylight returned.

End Chapter 7

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