Monday, January 20, 2014

My 2nd Novel: Hidden Secrets; Chapter 46

Hidden Secrets
Chapter 46



This photo taken through the windshield of a Wyoming sunrise doesn't do the breathtaking beauty justice. There have been a few times I've found myself still writing as the sun breaks over the mountains near my home. Umm, I had to take the good ol' vow to be non-grumpy on those days and pretend I wasn't tired. I've burned the midnight oil many times. It's what writers do.


Hidden Secrets
Leona Palmer Haag
 
Chapter 46



Jenn sealed the envelope and glanced at the clock. She had precisely fifteen minutes to get dressed, dress Katie, and be gone. "Time to move it," Jenn said, taking Katie's plate of half-eaten pancakes away. Katie responded with an ear-splitting, "Ahhhhh!" and a quick grab at breakfast. The syrup bottle was knocked over and sticky syrup went everywhere—floor, countertop, bar stool and across Jenn's nightie.
Katie stopped mid-yelp. In fascination she watched sugary brown fluid ooze down the side of the counter in a slow motion river that puddled on the floor. She looked at her mother with big, I'm-in-trouble-now eyes. Jenn's first reaction was to rush to the sink for a wet cloth, but her second reaction won. She laughed. "Well, we'll soon see how we like our cleaning crew." Like a football, Jenn grabbed Katie and tucked her under her arm and turned away from the spreading mess. It was the first time, and possibly the last time, she'd ever run away from a kitchen disaster.
Jenn and Katie were both sporting wet hair when Jenn buckled Katie into the SUV eighteen minutes later. "Since we're not supposed to stick around, what are we going to do for the next three hours?" Jenn asked, looking at Katie in the rear view mirror as she backed out of the garage.
"Puppy," Katie said, seeing a fluff of fur race across the neighbor's small patch of front lawn and plop down on the porch like a rug.
"I agree. We'll puppy shop," Jenn said, loving the sudden inspiration.
After four pet stores where Katie happily looked at fish, birds, puppies, kittens, turtles and snakes, Jenn thought they'd seen enough. Next came a park, but the wind was too strong to stay long. Then came the post office where Jenn sent the over-stuffed envelope to Kevin. He'd forward the sketches to Angela in Chicago so they had a Dallas post mark. Finally they visited McDonalds. Katie played on the slide and in the balls until Jenn said, "That's enough, baby girl. We can go home now."
The sky darkened and the wind whipped around them as they headed for the SUV. Lightning flashed on the horizon. Just as Jenn finished buckling Katie inside, the clouds burst. Rain fell on Phoenix. Not like it did on Dallas. Heaven spit just enough drops to make the dust on the SUV turn into muddy pocks. With the wind still chasing dust clouds and the sky threatening to release more water dimples, Jenn started home.
"Hey, Uncle Kevin, is it safe to go back?" Jenn asked when Kevin answered the phone.
"The coast is clear," he replied. "Call me when you get your laptop booted up. I'll give you the passwords and you'll be set for some happy surfing. We've got filters on your email account. Just be aware that you won't have access to your paypal account, so your spending power will be nil."
"Am I on probation, Uncle Kevin?"
"No. Go to the mall if you want to shop," he gruffly replied.
Jenn pulled the dirty SUV into the garage and took a deep breath. Was it really safe to enter the castle? She finally unlatched her seatbelt and slid out. She unbuckled Katie and leaned her sleeping daughter over her shoulder. The keyless entry blinked green when she punched in the code. Jenn pushed the door open and peeked inside. The kitchen was spotless. As if no one lived there. Especially sloppy, pancake-eating, syrup drizzling, lazy people who didn't clean up after themselves.
"Hello?" Jenn whispered.
Not even an echo.
"Hello?" she called louder.
No reply.
Katie lifted her sleepy head. "Hello?" she groggily mimicked.
Jenn examined the kitchen first. It was spotless. No hint of syrup anywhere. The dishes had been washed, dried and put away. Almost as if she'd done it herself.  She wandered through the empty house. The sheets had been changed. Laundry done. Toys put—somewhere. But where? Now Jenn had to play hide and seek to find them. It took a while. She discovered them neatly stuffed inside a cupboard in the basement fitness room. Far from ordinary daily family life and very inconvenient.
Finally satisfied they were alone, Jenn lay her drowsy daughter down on the family room couch and faced the laptop sitting on the kitchen counter. A moment later it was open and Kevin was on the phone. Within minutes Kevin had hung up and Jenn was scanning the weather in places where Nick might be. Then places he wouldn't possibly go, like the Himalayas or Singapore or Madagascar.
It was more reasonable to see what it was like where people she knew lived, so Jenn typed in Chicago. It was seventeen-degrees and snowing in Andrea's neighborhood. Dallas was suffering at thirty-eight degrees that felt like twenty-nine. Phoenix was fifty-seven with the expected high to rise to the low-seventies on Saturday. Katie's swimming lessons would resume then.
When Katie awoke, Jenn took her hand and led her down to the toys. Jenn turned on country music and played on the fitness equipment while Katie raided the cupboard, tossing toys out right and left like a maniac cyclone. Jenn sang along with the music, talked to Katie, and enjoyed the loud commotion.
It was suppertime when Jenn and Katie finally called it quits. They both loaded up armfuls of treasures and made their way up the stairs to the main floor to scatter them. Jenn popped in a DVD for Katie and turned to her laptop to find a recipe to try out. Stuffed flounder? Poached salmon? Broiled swordfish? Irish potatoes? Candied carrots?
"Katie, I've got tuna sandwiches ready," Jenn said, setting two plates down on the large ottoman in front of the TV. Katie toddled over and dinner began with Sponge Bob in the background.
After Katie fell asleep that night, Jenn opened the laptop and wrote:
One week in the lap of luxury has passed in utter loneliness. I'd give anything to know where Nick is. Why can't he contact me when he's working? Who made up that silly rule, anyway? I think it stinks.
Jenn paused to have a good cry. Perhaps her tenth or twelfth since arriving in Arizona.  She finally wiped her eyes and wrote some more: Uncle Kevin is trying to keep me pacified. But what is money when my husband is so far away? Good grief, Nick could be across the street for all I know, but since I don't know where he is, it feels like he's a million miles away."
Jenn had another heart-wrenching cry.
Okay, I've cried twice tonight, she wrote. How many times does that make it now? Better question: has it been six or seven gallons of salty tears?
Jenn pushed the computer off her lap and crawled out of bed and paced the room in frustration. She finally ran a hot tub of water and soaked in a bubble bath. She willed herself to think about something else—anything besides being trapped in a castle. Like Rapunzel. Like Sleeping Beauty. Like Snow White. Like plain old ordinary Jenn Washington who never hurt a flea or caused trouble. Not even as a teenager.
Wrinkled, Jenn let the water out. She crawled back to bed and read her journal entry. She wrote one last note: How long is this magical, yet dreary, wonderland going to last before I'm jolted back to my favorite place—home?
  
End Chapter 46

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