Friday, November 15, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 54

Chapter 54


My son provided this picture of the Snake River. The name sounds kind of ominous, don't you think? I wish I'd thought to use it in this novel... 

On the banks of the Snake River Jenn turned to Matt. "It's time for you to stop this whole run-hide-and-scare-the-crud-out-of-me game," she whimpered. Before he could reply she shoved him. "Stop, now, Matt." "Jenn, no!" he said, but it was too late. His footing gave way and his body hurtled toward the churning waters below. Moments later his bobbing head and thrashing arms disappeared around a bend. Gone. Matt and his running urge were washed away. Jenn hiked Katie up on her hips and said, "Now, why didn't I do that three days ago? We're free at last! Come on, little baby bear, let's go find a KFC. She buckled Katie into her car seat and sat behind the wheel. That's when she discovered Matt had the keys in his pocket. She knew when he crawled from the water he'd track her down. She adjusted the rear view mirror and sure enough, there he was, stumbling and dripping and... carrying a KFC bag.

Well, that's not what happened, so I'll go on with the story as originally written...


Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 54



Clear packing tape covered the latch on the delivery door of Angels Deli, disabling the lock and allowing access. Matt crossed the kitchen and pushed open the swinging door leading into the dining area. The open/closed sign hung on the front door—the interior side saying closed, showing the office had sent someone to assess the area safe enough for the exchange. Good.
Knowing he was being observed, he bought three pastries, tea for Jenn and milk for Katie. He sat at a table to wait.
Jenn's fright the night before and the footsteps traversing the hallway had put him on high alert. They could have been nothing more than innocent events that created undue tension, but he felt they meant something. Time would tell—possibly only minutes.
Matt scanned headlines on the newspaper left on the table and consumed his pastry. Seven-thirty arrived without Jenn. He studied his watch repeatedly during the next three minutes. When a table closer to the door became available he moved and sat where he would watch traffic.
A customer approached the door, stared at the sign in confusion, then opened the door. The sign jiggled as the door shut, reflecting a bright red ‘closed’ in the glass. Closed? Springing to his feet, Matt grabbed the sign and twisted it around. Both sides said closed! Jenn’s driver hadn't stopped—never delivered his precious cargo! He slammed the sign against the door and raced from the deli, leaving behind Danish and drinks. He’d lost his best friend's wife—as someone intended.
“Curtis, Jenn didn't show!” Matt yelled into his cell phone. “Find her. Nick could easily put a bullet through my chest now, and probably will if he doesn't get her back. As for Jenn, she'll let me die a slow and painful death if she lives through this and ever sees me again. Find her! STAT!”
Curtis swore a blue streak before saying, “Hold on—I’ll see what I can do. Stay with me. Don’t hang up.”
“I've been double-crossed,” Matt shouted, being cut off by senseless music on hold.
Curtis returned. “My contact still has her.”
“Who tampered with the sign? This was supposed to be a secret operation. What happened?”
“Both sides said closed? Who is the other player?” Curtis echoed.
“I asked you that,” Matt shouted. “Give me the contact's number so I can interrogate him personally.”
“I can't do that—I'll relay.”
Annoying music interrupted Matt’s reply. Curtis returned. “He’ll meet you—give you Jenn and the kid. He’s heading to a warehouse on....”
“Not a warehouse. We're talking about a woman. Let's not freak her out. She's already spooked. I’ll pick her up at a mall. Find me a mall.”
“Okay, hang on while I arrange it.”
If Matt could have cut off the music, he would have. He’d rather eavesdrop on what Curtis and the contact were saying. Curtis came back, gave directions to a mall and described a white utility van with Jacob's Plumbing painted on the sides.
“Thanks,” Matt breathed. “Don't let Marshall know you screwed up—and don’t frame me for it.”
“They say you're AWOL. Did you plan the diversion?”
“I’d be out of the country if I’d turned.” He spun his car around, and moments later found the freeway. Threading his way through rush hour traffic, he almost missed his exit. His tires squealed around the corner as he pulled into the mall parking lot. He cruised through once, seeing no plumbing van. He parked and leaned his head against his steering wheel. More things could go wrong than he could count. He'd never forgive himself if he lost Jenn. His career would end, but worse, his life would crash. Maybe not physically, but he'd never survive the loss.
“God, she better be safe,” he whispered.
Matt’s phone beeped. Curtis said, “My contact lost them—he was hijacked.”
“Repeat that,” Matt gasped.
“Four muscle-cars converged on him, forced him off the road and took Mrs. Washington and the kid.”
“Give me details—license numbers, make, model, color—everything! Where are they heading? Give me what you’ve got.”
“The driver’s in rough condition. I’ll get what I can and call you back.” The line clicked dead.   
Matt roared out of the parking lot. His phone rang as he merged onto the freeway. “Jensen here,” he barked.
“One million,” a voice hissed. “But only if you want them alive.”
“Who is this?” Matt shouted.
“Shut up and listen. Head west on the Eisenhower Expressway. Before you reach Ridgeland Avenue you’ll pass a little white-sided, green-shingled house on your right. Take the next exit and make your way back to it. Be there before noon with the money or the ladies go swimming.” The line went dead.
Matt’s stomach churned. Would the office give him a million dollars in less than five hours? Every piece of the ragged puzzle needed to fit together snugly or he might never see Jenn and Katie again. He called Curtis. “Something stinks. You, me or both of us are talking on a multi-party phone line. Where is Jenn? Who’s holding them ransom for a million dollars?”
Curtis sucked in his breath. “What?”
“I got a ransom call!” Matt shouted. “I need money—fast. One million!”
“Force the rat into the open.”
Matt lowered his voice. “Listen to me Curtis—I won’t play games with their lives. All I have is a ransom demand. I need one-million now or you’ll have blood on your hands. Got that?”
Curtis remained silent, although Matt heard his fingers tapping. The sound paused. A new voice came on the phone line—Marshall—the only person with power to transfer hefty funds. It wasn’t comforting hearing his boss say, “Jensen, where's the woman, and who wants the money?”
 “I hoped you’d know. Find the ears in the office. Who’s playing, but acting deaf and dumb? Send me info and that money.”
“One million?” Marshall skeptically asked.
“I didn’t choose the price, but I have chosen to pass along the demand. I want that million!”
Silence filled the phone line before Marshall said, “Pick it up at US Bank at ten-thirty. I’ll arrange help for you.”
“Thank you,” Matt said. He wiped sweat from his face and spun his car around, heading back into the city as he noted the bank address Curtis relayed. But he had nowhere to go until he could actually do something about the situation, so he drove aimlessly. It irked him to waste time in Chicago when he wanted to head for Denver. He worried about Jenn. She could foul things up faster than anyone he knew. He prayed she wouldn't.
Matt picked up his cell phone and made a call. “Curtis, is the line safe?”
“Speak.”
“What’s happening in the office—who’s sniffing around?”
“We’re clean here. The money is on its way, although Marshall isn't excited to part with it. This isn't a good time to mention the Durango, is it?”
He chuckled and the tension eased. “No. It will be found soon enough.”
“What are you driving now?”
“A road hazard. Have Debbie make arrangements for a new car for me. I need something ultra sporty to fit my personality, with a car seat in the back for the kid, and it needs to be big enough for all of Jenn's luggage. Someone picked it up, I assume. She’ll never forgive me if she doesn’t get everything back.”
“Give me a minute to check on it.”
Two songs played before Curtis returned. “The car is waiting for you at the Airport Avis—but the luggage is missing. The room was empty—swept clean. No fingerprints, not even yours. If I were there I'd find something. That’s all I’ve got. Sorry.”
Matt groaned. “Wish you were here too. Tell Marshall I’ll need an extra thousand for necessities. Make it two-thousand—Jenn likes extra nice stuff when she’s not paying.”
Curtis’ laugh sounded strangled. “I'll try. Keep in touch. Nick was last reported in El Paso. He’s heading north, moving slowly toward Santa Fe, we suspect.”
“Keep me informed. Don't tell him we lost his wife. I'd like to live another day.”
“Good luck.”

End Chapter 54

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