Friday, November 15, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 53

Chapter 53


This was my backyard a couple of weeks ago. Since then every tree has dumped their leaves on my lawn and through my gardens. They've been raked up and hauled to the green waste dump. You're lucky because that means I can spend time posting my novel!

Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 53



Inside the cart Jenn found a hand hold as she situated herself on a soft blanket. With the other hand she pushed Katie’s cheek against her shoulder and whispered, “Shh. Close your eyes.” She shut her own, perking her ears and hearing Matt’s farewell, but not daring to reply. Two sets of footsteps retreated.
The elevator descended again, the door opened and the cart moved. The cleaning woman—or whoever that woman was—pushed her and whistled. Half her notes masked by rolling cart wheels and the remaining ones sounded like the theme song from a horror flick. The cart stopped and the woman helped her out saying, “Take care, honey.” Her smile contradicted the scenes Jenn's imagination had conjured up during her short ride.
If secrecy were important, the sports car Jenn found waiting for her screamed notice me! She climbed in saying, “This isn’t safe. My daughter needs a car seat. If you’re pulled over we'll never get to the deli on time.”
The driver waved at the blanket Jenn had been sitting on in the cart that Katie had dragged along with them. “Cover the kid with that,” he growled.
Jenn buckled up and shook out folds from the blanket only to discover it was a towel. As if on cue, the gun in her pocket gouged her hip. The driver wove through traffic, glancing in his mirrors and acting like a thief expecting apprehension. She focused on the clock—watching minutes countdown.
“Angels Deli,” the driver announced, jerking his head toward the curb. “It's closed.”
Jenn glanced at her watch. “We’re early. I'll wait.” Her hand reached for the door handle as the man’s foot hit the gas pedal. She saw customer’s occupying tables inside the deli before she was thrown back in the seat. “They’re not closed,” she gasped. 
They are to us—we’ve got company.” The driver pushed her head down. “Careful, now. Don’t become a target.”
The car rocketed around a turn. Jenn hugged Katie and peeked through the window. “How long until we reach the pavilion?”
The driver laughed. “There’s no pavilion—just us, honey.”
Jenn angled her hand to grasp her gun, but speeding in and out of traffic didn’t seem like a good time to kill a driver. She began pleading for their lives, keeping her loaded threat hidden. 

End Chapter 53

If you love big long chapters, I'm sorry I've been disappointing you. Stay tuned for Chapter 54 next...

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