Thursday, November 14, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 48

Chapter 48

 

Jenn might literally be out of the woods, 
but I doubt she's really out of the woods...


Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 48



Room six-thirty-eight was beautifully draped in golds, greens, deep autumn reds and purples—a feast for the eyes—with carpet begging for bare feet. Plopping down on a cushy lounge with fringe dusting the carpet, Jenn sighed. “This is the life. Katie and I will stay here until after you’ve saved the world and you’re released from prison for destroying that helpless Durango. Pay the tab in advance for room service for a year and send Nick to fetch us.”

Matt laughed and pushed open the door leading to the bedroom. He disappeared with the first load of luggage, then returned for the rest. “Your plan would work until they booted Katie out for wreaking havoc.” He sat in a king-sized chair and kicked off his new shoes before propping his feet on the coffee table.

“Katie bear, don't play in the curtains,” Jenn called, watching the curtain rod bend.

“While you're saving the Hilton from your pint-sized tornado, I’ll check out the whirlpool bath,” Matt said. He left her alone with a giggling cyclone on the loose.

Wishing she’d thought of the escape first, she listened to the water run and jets roar while Katie explored. Matt finally emerged with wet hair. “Your turn. I'll be back in an hour or so with dinner.”

Jenn sorted through plastic bags stuffed inside new suitcases, found bath supplies and scooted Katie into the bathroom. Bubbles rose and Katie leaned over the side and slapped at them, giggling. Jenn plopped her in the water and followed close behind, singing about mermaids and lost treasures pearls and gold. Less than two minutes later a chill slithered along Jenn’s spine—someone was watching her. She could feel their eyes. She sank into the water, peeking above the iridescent bubbles expecting to spot someone. No one was there and the button was still compressed on the door lock.

Incurably modest because she'd hated her mother's blatantly seductive lifestyle, Jenn silently scolded herself—all the running and talking about being followed had messed with her mind. Even if she was still bathing when Matt returned, he was locked out.

To relax, Jenn turned on the jets. Rushing water soothed her and bubbles billowed higher. “This is the life, Katie-bug.”

“Da life,” her daughter repeated.

Jenn crowned her daughter’s dark curls with sparkling bubbles. “You’re a sea princess.”

Katie shook her head and sparkling bubbles cascades down and they laughed and repeated the bubbles. Then another chill coursed through Jenn—more definite, more icy, more thoroughly. Spooked, she huddled in the bubbles and shut off the jets to listen.

Silence.

“Matt?” she croaked, before clearing her throat and trying again.

“Madd?” Katie called.

Silence.

But something didn't feel right. Jenn slid from the water and wrapped herself in a towel and pulled Katie out despite her shrieks of dismay. She hesitated at the door, then slowly unlocked it and peeked into the bedroom. “Matt—are you back?”

No answer, just a soft click—not a computer keyboard, not a footstep, not a keycard in a lock, not a gun—something unknown.

Wanting to hide and wanting her gun—opposing desires—Jenn stepped into the bedroom, a puddle forming in the thick carpet at her feet. “Matt?” she whispered.

Silence. Like before a storm—or after death.

The door between the bedroom and sitting room stood ajar and she couldn’t remember if she’d left it that way. Through the narrow opening she spotted her purse resting on the floor beside the lounge, the zipper half open. Her handgun was tucked inside.

Goose bumps tingled across her skin and water tickled down her back as Jenn froze in the doorway with indecision. She could dart into the room and grab the gun, but beyond her sight was someone waiting in ambush?

“Bubbles,” Katie whined, trying to scramble over her shoulder to return to the tub. Jenn’s mind begged to know what to do as Katie wiggled. Then she heard something—movement. A soft thud. Footsteps in the sitting room near the balcony door? Definitely more footsteps in the hall. Soft sounds from every direction! The edge of the curtain within her sight fluttered. Jenn inched forward. The footsteps stopped—and she did too. Someone was there—right there—almost close enough to reach out and touch. She felt it, knew it and was as sure as anything she’d ever known in life. A thud, louder than the first, echoed on the balcony.

Katie whimpered as Jenn sprang into the sitting room, dropped to her knees and clawed through the contents of her purse until her fingers grasped cold metal. She yanked the gun out, shoved the magazine in, racked the slide and released the safety. The door burst open and she faced her target dead center as her trigger finger found its place.

“Jenn!” Matt dropped the Olive Garden takeout bag. His hands shot up. “Stop!”

“Madd!” Katie shrieked, breaking free from her mother, but tangling in the towels.

Clutched her writhing daughter around the waist with one hand to hold her back, Jenn turned her gun toward the curtains. “Check the balcony,” she whispered.

Matt rammed the door shut behind him and slammed the lock into place. A gun appeared in his hand as he raced across the room and shoved the curtain aside and opened the balcony door and stepped out. Returning moments later he crossed the room and knelt beside her, wrapping her in his arms. “You okay, Jenn? What happened” He pried her gun from her grasp.

“I felt someone in here,” she sobbed.

He shoved her weapon into his pocket. “Where?”

“Here—in this room. Behind the curtain. On the balcony. Everywhere. Someone was watching me. I heard them. I felt them. Someone was here. Here!”

He rose and checked the room—the entertainment armoire, behind furniture, inside closets, the bathroom, the bedroom. “No one’s here,” he said. “Finish your bath and we’ll eat.”

Jenn wiped tears with the back of her hand. “Do you mind turning around?”

End Chapter 48

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