Thursday, November 14, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 42

Chapter 42


I'm addicted to flowers. So addicted that I took my camera with me on a hike down to the mailbox last spring and snapped photos of everything in bloom on the the way down and back...

Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 42



Chattering birds and Katie saying, “Toast?” awoke Jenn.

“We don't have any,” she whispered.

“We have granola bars,” Matt said.

She opened her eyes to find a blanket of snow surrounding them and Matt holding out two granola bars. Jenn unwrapped one. “Katie gets both—one for breakfast, the second for lunch.” She broke off pieces and offered them to her daughter between sips of icy water.

Hiking came next. They picked their way through brambles and along ravines. Snow melted as the sun rose, creating mud puddles. With knees shaking and stomach complaining, Jenn wondered how long she’d live. Ahead, Matt pressed on with Katie bouncing on his back, acting like they were having fun. “Have you ever been camping before?” Matt called back.

“No, and this isn’t camping—it’s torture. I do hotels and restaurants.”

He paused, holding a branch out of her way. “Tell me about your favorite vacation.”

She spoke of Florida, sunshine, warmth, dining, luxury and ease.

“Then this ranks as your worst vacation?”

She grunted in reply, grasping branches for support as they worked their way down a steep bank.

“I should have taken you to Hawaii, but Montana got in the way,” he joked.

“That’s not funny,” she muttered.

After several minutes of silence he said, “I hope you know I love you.” He reached back and she grabbed his hand and he pulled her up a steep spot. “You do know it, don’t you?”

She glared at him before bending to wipe mud from her knees. “You tried to sleep with me last night, but that hardly counts as love.”

“I didn't try to sleep with you. I tried to save your life. Big difference. If I was after sex I’d choose a better place—without a baby.” He pointed to his ring finger. “This isn’t just gold—it’s commitment. I take marriage seriously—mine and yours.”

“Does that mean you don't love me?”

He turned his back on her, heading off without checking to see if she followed. Jenn scrambled to catch up, panting, “Sorry about the sarcasm. Yeah, I know you love me. You’ve done a lot for me. Do you remember finding a bike in a dumpster and fixing it and giving it to me? It was the first present I remember receiving. Thanks.”

“Shawn and I spent hours working on it. We taught you how to ride. We thought we were super mechanics. You did too.”

They slogged along in silence for several minutes. “Are we going to die?” she asked.

He shrugged. “I hope not. I have a dental appointment next week.”

No appointments dotted Jenn’s calendar, not even a job, she was sure. Nick might be dead. The only thing she had back home were memories. That reminded her of taking out the trash. She stumbled and fell.

Matt turned back. “You okay?”

She grabbed a low hanging branch and silently tugged herself up.

“We'll make it once we find a road.”

“And just like that hiding, starving and freezing end?”

“No. We start a new plan—how to evade bad guys.” He grasped her shoulders. “I know you hate me at the moment and you'd just as soon shoot me, but you need to know I love you and I'd lay down my life for you. I'd appreciate it if you'd try to preserve mine as well.”

“How am I supposed to do that?” she snapped.

“Do everything I say. We're not even close to the end of this ordeal.”

She shoved past him. “You ask a lot from me. Pack. Get in the car. Trust me. Save my life. Well, I have news for you, Mr. J—now it's your turn to follow me.”

He obeyed without arguing, following her up one hill and down the next. When they came to a point where she needed to decide which direction to turn she pointed left and he pointed right. Jenn shook her head. “Sorry. I’m still boss. Got that?”        

“But....”

“Get over it or give my baby back.” Without waiting, she reached up for Katie. He hesitated, then conceded and turned left. Almost immediately the terrain grew rougher. She regretted her decision, wanting to turn back, but pride kept her moving. After perhaps an hour of hard work they stumbled onto an old road with trees sprouting in the center.

“Which way now?” Matt asked.

Jenn didn’t hesitate. “Downhill.” Around the first corner they began a steep ascent. She’d made another bad choice. She wanted to sit down and cry, but before she collapsed, prepared to pound tire ruts with her fists and wallow in self-pity, the road turned again and wound down the hillside.

“Do you love me?” Matt asked.

Jenn walked in silence—steam building.

“There are lots of kinds of love besides romantic love, you know. Do you love me?”

“You were the rich kid across the gravel road in the double wide. What's not to love about that?”

He laughed. “We were both dirt poor—so impoverished the cockroaches chose a better neighborhood to infest.”

It was a funny thought—and very true. She almost smiled.

“Seriously, do you love—no—do you maybe like me?”

“Not today.”

After several minutes of silence he said, “I thought not.”

They trudged on without speaking. Minutes slipped past, turning into hours. Katie awoke, then slept. Finally, Jenn knew she couldn’t go any farther. Sitting in the middle of the road, she said. “I'm done. My energy ran out ten miles and two days ago.”

Matt squatted beside her. “Need a break?”

She shook her head at the man with her sleeping baby on his back. “I want to blink and open my eyes at home. I wish I was sitting on the back porch watching Katie in her wading pool and sipping a tall iced tea.” Tears streamed down her cheeks. She wiped them away with the back of a dirty wrist.

He took her hand and tugged. “Come on, your porch is around the next bend.”

She pulled free. “I can't get up. I'm starving. I've got the shakes. I'm freezing. I can't figure out why I should take another step.” She buried her face against her knees.

He smoothed the back of her hair. “You've got to do it for Nick and Katie. For yourself. For me. Please?” He took her icy hand and rubbed the back of her fingers.

She bit her bottom lip and shook her head.
He rose, pulling her to her feet. Wrapping an arm around her waist, they silently started off—one footstep, then another, slipping on wet ferns and mud, stumbling over roots and side-stepping boulders. 

End Chapter 42

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