Thursday, November 14, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 41

Here's chapter 41, hot off the press!


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Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 41



Jenn steadied her balance on unseen rocks beneath dark water before taking a tentative step toward shore. With Katie propped on his shoulder and dragging their submerged bags and packs behind like anchors, Matt called over his shoulder, “Coming?” Before she could force words between her chattering teeth he reached back and grabbed her sleeve and pulled her forward, nearly yanking her over. 
“I’m fine,” Jenn gasped, slapping his hand away. But at the rate her legs moved, she despaired—it would take weeks to reach shore. But soon the water lapped at her thighs, then her knees and finally her calves. She stumbled, falling headlong, arms flailing outward, smacking the water. Matt turned back and grabbed her shoulder to pull her up, but she had frozen in place. By the time he’d deposited Katie on shore and returned, she’d crawled to the edge. He grabbed her arm and helped her clear the last few feet of water.
Tears, rain and lake streamed down Jenn’s cheeks. She clutched her screaming daughter to her wet clothing knowing she had no warmth to offer. Matt pulled her to her feet and guided her to a fallen log sheltered beneath dripping pine boughs. He gathered wood, and after scraping through soggy bark to reach the dry core, coaxed a fire. Smoke leaked from the bundle and flames followed. They huddled close.
 Matt pulled out the remaining bread and poured the lake from the bag. “Do you like bread soup?”
She frowned and shook her head.
He handed Jenn the bottle of peanut butter. “Feed Katie.”
With her finger, Jenn scooped and Katie licked it off. Within minutes Katie stopped crying. Matt wrapped soggy bread around a stick and toasted the coil over the flames. He pulled a piece off and held it out. “See if Katie likes this.”
Jenn dipped it in peanut butter and Katie devoured it.
“Do you have any food?” he asked.
She shrugged toward the diaper bag. He dumped all their bags out and sorted the contents, waving at the meager food supply. “Do we finish this off now—fuel our bodies to produce heat—and hope for the best tomorrow, or should we save it for breakfast?”
We won’t touch it. It’s all Katie’s.”
Matt repacked the bags and stood. “Feed the fire while I hunt down food.” He pushed a pile of sticks within her reach.
“Leave both guns.”
“I'm only taking myself.”
Jenn watched him walk away, guns untouched. He wandered alongside the water, then stripped off his shirt and began washing it—slapping it against the water and dragging it to shore. So much for being a provider. Her fingers itched to seize the weapons—but he’d know and confront her. She ignored crazy Matt and transformed the little flame into a bonfire. She wrung water from Katie’s blanket and spread it on the log, then propped up soggy diapers close enough to dry without melting.
“Hungry?” Matt unrolled his wet shirt, revealing dozens of tiny flapping fish.
She grunted and leaned away.
“Watch this.” He strung them on a branch and held them over the fire. Their scaly skins blistered. “Ever been to a fish fry?”
“Do you know how gross that is?”
“This is the real test.” He pulled off a charred minnow and popped it in his mouth.
Jenn groaned. “I'm going to be sick.” But she watched instead of turned away.
“Crunchy. Hot all the way through. Not bad. Want one?”
“There’s no bribe big enough.”
He laughed and ate a few more. “They weren't hard to catch once I got the hang of it. There are thousands of little schools along the rocks.” He held one out. “Here, see what you think.”
“I'd rather die.”
He turned to Katie. “Yum, yum. Want one?”
Jenn knocked his hand away. “No!” She swung her daughter behind her back so she couldn’t be tempted.
“They’re not your home cooking, but better than starving. Try one. If you like it, or think it might save your life, I'll catch more. Katie needs food too. Test it for her.”
With her stomach in a tight, hungry knot, and refusing to picture Katie dying, she closed her eyes and held out her hand.
“Eat it in one bite. Don't spend a lot of time chewing.”
Jenn pulled a face—and ate the fish.
“Not bad, huh?”
“This is between just the two of us, got that?”
He laughed and zipped his lips.
After Katie sampled a crunchy fish, Jenn said, “If this kills her, her death will be on your hands.”
“I've been trying to avoid that for days now.”
“If you were doing a better job of it, we wouldn’t have gone swimming in a semi-defrosted glacier.”
He remained silent, piling sticks on the fire.
Jenn readjusted everything on the improvised drying racks. “You must watch too much TV. When we get back, do me a favor and switch to home improvement shows.”
Matt studied the forest for a moment before facing her. “I’m prepared to die for you and Katie. You're practically my kid sister and she’s like my niece—maybe my own kid. Your husband is my best friend, and so is your brother.”
She studied her knees. “Stop being sentimental—it’s not working. It doesn’t change the fact that I’m a hostage.”
“I've lost family—my mother, Rebecca and a baby. Losing you and Katie are the last thing I want. The situation is holding all of us hostage—not me.”
When his voice cracked, she looked up. “Will you swear that’s true on a stack of Bibles?”
“Better, I’ll swear on my life. Will that do?”
“For now. But we’re lost. What do we do to live?”
“Hike out, just as soon as you and Katie are warm enough.”
Jenn checked the diapers. “It will be a while.”
Matt nodded and headed off to fish. He toasted another meal for them before he checked the diapers himself. “Let’s go,” he said.
Jenn doubted they were ready but packed everything up—damp blanket and towel included. As she put Katie in the pack, Matt smothered the fire. As if on cue the rain stopped and the clouds lifted. “Look up,” Matt said.
Instead of men hoisting guns, snow dusted the hillside they'd descended above the lake. He turned her shoulders away and they started hiking in the opposite direction. Presently the sun broke through and warmed their backs. Life improved until more clouds moved in and the wind whipped up, whistling through the trees and stirring bone-chilling cold. They hiked until full darkness halted them. Matt lowered Katie to the soggy forest floor. “We’ll spend the night here.”
Jenn sank down, certain she'd never rise again. She caressed her daughter's chilled cheek. “I can't believe anyone can sleep wedged in a pack.”
Matt wrapped her and Katie in the poncho.
“Will you build a fire?”
“The sky’s clearing. Someone would see the smoke.”
Having already survived a night without heat, and hoping luck would hold out and they’d do it again, Jenn cuddled Katie while trying to find a comfortable position. Everything was bumpy, wet and drippy, but fortunately, not frozen
“Care if I join you?” Matt said, stretching out beside her.
“Find your own place,” she snapped.
“For heat conservation, not intimacy. To save our lives.”
“I'll take my chances.”
“What about Katie?”
“She agrees with me.”  
Matt ignored her and moved from beside her and stretched out beside Katie. He turned his back on them and placed his empty backpack over Katie like a blanket. Too cold to sleep, Jenn burned with anger. What right did he have trying to cuddle? She was married—happily! He might have been the boy across the street a long time ago, but he wasn’t the same nice kid from way back then. He’d become sinister.
Shawn had once told her, “Matt’s a good guy—always looking out for others, always on his best behavior—the kind you can count on.” She had believed her brother until recently, and wanting to cuddle witnessed against him.
Shawn had also said, “Matt is driven. He goes after what he wants until he gets it.” Less than a month ago Shawn had said, “He seems happier. Monica must be good for him.”
Jenn had replied with something like, “Monica is a trophy—not good for much except bragging about. It seems like Matt wants to change something in his life. He started with her, but who knows where he’ll stop.”
Shawn had laughed. “You don’t like her.”
“Am I too obvious? A few years ago Matt traveled and thrived on it. Nick does the traveling now. Matt hasn’t said so, but I think he regrets the switch. How long can a friendship survive if Matt envies Nick?”
“He’ll find a way to compensate,” Shawn had said. “He always wins.”
In the darkness Jenn examined ways Matt might attempt gaining victory. Her thoughts spiraled downward, growing darker—envisioning wolves wearing wool while hiding fangs behind promises—all looked like Matt.

End Chapter 41

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