Wednesday, November 13, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 34

My Novel: Chapter 34

Running:
I usually run in the morning when I'm fresh and eager--except during the winter when I have to convince myself to get out in the cold. I don't mind running in the snow, but I love clear roads. My best winter runs have occurred on sunny days under a brilliant blue sky with highs in the low 30's and absolutely no wind. It's happened maybe once, but I keep dreaming...

Writing:
Talking about dreaming--it's early afternoon and I want a nap. Can someone please unchain me from this computer? I'll share my chocolate... I promise I'll post another chapter later...



Writing tip: There are times to write and times to sleep. And do other things...

Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 34

Blind.
After reading the single word four times and looking around the cabin to see if she was missing something important and obvious, it dawned on Jenn that Matt had left her a note concerning his whereabouts—the hunter’s blind he’d mentioned. As she pulled out eggs to scramble for breakfast she took a quick inventory inside the cooler. They were running low on meat but still had hotdogs and beef patties. Would he bring back venison? She wondered how she’d cook deer meat. She’d figure it out if forced, but she’d keep Katie away from the butchering process. Her eyes lifted to the back window filled with sunshine where a wren twittered from the railing.
Watchtower. That was how he considered the blind.
Matt was holed up in a watchtower—a place to play cops and robbers without harming anyone, even Bambi. That was a relief!
Katie tired of the cabin’s toys long before Jenn hoped that morning so she took a flashlight into the dark pit below to find more. A tangled web of disarray met her—ropes, gear, junk, trash—a yard sale without buyers. She shook dust off an old boom box. Matt would never turn on the generator so she couldn’t sing along. She stashed it in a heap she vowed she wouldn’t disturb.
A grimy backpack caught her attention—it had an open top and two holes in the bottom. Useless, except to carry stuff up the ladder. She tossed in a few handy odds and ends. Upstairs, she cleaned up the pack and set it on the deck to dry, then headed for the front yard—meadow—swing with Katie.
“Everything is quiet,” Matt said when he entered the clearing.
“Because Montana has been evacuated. We should go too.”
He chuckled. “Nice try. What’s for lunch?”
“Surprise me.”
Matt paused to tickle Katie on his way to the cabin. A short time later he announced lunch was ready. After eating he leaned back in his chair. “I caught a link a while ago.”
Silence filled the cabin. Finally Jenn said what she knew he wanted to hear, “And what does that mean to us?”
“I don’t know.”
She stopped wiping off the countertop and faced him. “Then why mention it?”
He shrugged. “Another agent is down. They found his body. It’s Natalie's partner, Pete Williams. It looks like someone with inside information is responsible. The office speculates there might will be simultaneous terrorist attacks on the east and west coasts. Maybe over gun running, with weapons flowing in through Mexico. The main hit will probably be D.C., New York, the president, or economic centers. A big city or two in California will be targeted to attempt splitting the country apart.”
Jenn sat across from him and laughed. “I heard that theory after September Eleven. Dream up a new scheme so you don’t sound so stupid.”
“New scheme, old scheme—makes no difference if it works. I’ve seen better and worse. Most don’t happen.”
“Because you’re the hero?”
“Partly.”
She sighed and got up. “All this excitement about the world ending is exhausting. I need a nap. Hurry and tell me how I figure into world peace and the stability of civilization.”
Matt smiled, pulling out of a somber mood that had overtaken him. “I’m not sure why a little girl who manages a day care center is involved. Are you a secret agent?”
She snorted. “Yes. Undercover, I enroll students and teach music and art. Very dangerous. Kazoos and finger paints are deadly.”
Grinning, Matt said, “You don’t run an underground drug line on the side?”
“No, but I compute payroll, and believe me, the whole country is concerned about that.”
“Do you cheat on taxes?”
“No. And do you know how stupid everything you’re saying sounds? How would I possibly fit into your elaborate terrorist scenario? Give me a story good enough to believe—but also won’t keep me awake at night.”
 A beach ball bounced against Matt’s knee with Katie in hot pursuit. He kicked it away and she chased it, squealing. He turned back to Jenn. “Kid, you got into this solely because you married brains—or maybe stupidity. If Nick wasn’t…”
Jenn jumped up and jabbed a finger into his chest. “Nick is not stupid! He's a thousand times smarter than everyone I know, and that includes you, Mr. J!”
Almost tumbling from his chair, Matt held up his hands. “Whoa! Jenn! Everyone in this business is stupid. Picture it this way: It's like we're always standing in a fireworks factory flicking a cigarette lighter. It’s not safe, but we’re not backing off. We do what we do because we choose to.”
A finger jabbed again. “Nick is not stupid!”
“Maybe not, but I am. I should be selling life insurance instead of sitting on a mountaintop waiting for the world to end—as you so adeptly put it. I’d rather be in the middle of the battle.” He jumped up and strode across the room, plopping down on a sagging sofa. He rubbed his hand over a shadow of beard, then looked up. “I wish I was home as much as you do. You’d be baking muffins and I'd be in the office. You’d be breaking something like your mixer and I'd be trying to fix a corner of the world.” His head lowered into his hands.
Jenn marched across the room and faced him. “Instead, you're stuck with me and my baby and calling my husband stupid. We can leave now if you want! Give me exactly ten seconds to grab my baby and bags and we’ll be out the door. Once we’re back in something called a town, you can be rid of us and save the entire universe for all I care—all without our help or interference!”
Katie climbed into Matt’s lap and he tussled her hair. “Being with you isn't bad, Jenn. It's being stuck in a hole—without complete information—that’s frustrating.” He looked up. “We’re in the exact same place as Nick—in a hole.”
When Matt buried his face in his hands again Katie pulled them away giggling, “Madd—boo! Madd—boo!”
“I’m sick of boo,” Jenn whispered.
He faced her. “Me too, but if Katie wants it, she gets it.” He grabbed the toddler and tickled her. She scrambled off, giggling with each boo.
Sinking into a sofa, Jenn watched Matt chase her daughter. She called across the cabin, “Are we leaving?”
He caught his victim and tossed her in the air. “No.” He set Katie down. “I’ll be back for dinner.”
The cabin quieted after Matt left and Katie settled down to nap. Jenn checked the locks and the views from the windows, then checked Katie again before checking locks. All afternoon she could wander the same circle of checking windows and locks like a crazy lady, she decided, if she didn’t divert her attention. She closed the curtains, placed an end table in front of the door and curled up beside Katie.
Fitful dreams submerged her, but she never surfaced until a soft creaking sound intruded. Her eyelids jerked open, expecting to see the door pushing open with the end table scratching across the floor, but she found Katie sitting in a shaft of sunlight playing with floating dust motes. A spring in the old sofa complained. That had been the sound—just Katie in play. That was the way life should be.
Jenn swung her feet off the sofa and went to the back door, pushed it open and stepped out. Below lay the bottomless ravine—not an escape route from the cabin. Out front waited the Jeep, but Matt had the keys. Nothing could pry them away physically, but maybe a well-rehearsed speech would work.
That night she sat across from Matt on the cold hearth and rubbed her chilled arms. “I’m sorry I’ve been hard on you, Matt. I appreciate what you've done for me, but I'm not worth the effort and I don't need a babysitter. I'll pack my last few things so we can leave in the morning.”
“You’ve been a trooper,” he said.
“A whiner. You don’t need me around.”
He leveled his gaze on her. “You okay?”
Tears budded in her eyes and she shook her head, losing the closed-book face she’d attempted. “No. You’re getting what you want and I’m not. You threw me in your car, kidnapped me, and stole my freedom.”
Matt let out an exasperated sigh. “That’s not how it is.”
“Liar! You wanted to come here, so here we are. You want to stay here, so here we sit. You get what you want. I cook and clean and do everything you say like some mindless puppet, and in return I get Montana in the dark ages.”
He hung his head.
Jenn hardly believed he felt remorse. “Why are you torturing us? Katie is just a baby and….”
“She’s not complaining.”
“She’s too little and innocent so I’m doing it for her. We used to be friends. Is this how you treat a friend? What do you think Shawn will do when he finds out you’re worse than Gary and Danny?”
Matt jumped up, stopping her flood. He tossed his phone into her lap. “It’s been a long, grueling day, Jenn. Keeping you alive isn’t exactly easy. I'm going to do a few calisthenics before I take a shower. Try to get a satellite connection. Call Nick or the office or your brother or anyone you want. Play a game if that's the only thing available, but we’re not going anywhere until I know it’s safe.” He snatched the phone back before she could respond, and pushed a few buttons. “There. It’s unlocked. Push one for the office if you want to talk to Marshall. Two is Monica but she’s still not answering, three is you, four might reach Nick, and if you want to talk to Curtis, push five. Don’t worry about six through nine, but if you like talking to strangers, give them a try. They’re agents—primed to be secretive—so don’t expect answers, but who knows, maybe this is your lucky night.” He yanked off his shirt and dropped to the floor and began doing hyper-speed push-ups.
Jenn turned her back on the distraction. She pushed Nick’s number a dozen times. Nothing. Marshall didn’t connect. She hesitated before she tried Monica, then caved in. The phone didn’t respond. She tried Nick a hundred more times. No use. She began pushing random numbers. Nothing.
“Your phone is junk.”
Matt grunted.
Starting at number one, Jenn’s finger raced up and down the keypad, without luck. After number seven or eight, there was a brief connection. For the first time she felt hopeful about going home. “What should I say if I reach someone?”
“Anything you want. Vent if it helps.”
“Is there a special code?”
“Yeah, but don't worry about it. They’ll figure out they’re talking to you.”
Fingers shaking, Jenn pushed buttons, primarily number four, but skipping through the others now and then. Minutes ticked away.
“Any luck, kid?” Matt asked.
“Nothing. Either I'm doing things wrong or there's no link.”
Matt crossed the room and looked over her shoulder. “You're doing it right. Keep trying. I'll take a quick shower and take over. There’s no guarantee we’ll get a link tonight.”
“Will the battery die first?”
“I doubt it, but if it does, take it out to the Jeep to charge.” The keys landed in her lap—a good omen.
Matt headed for the bathroom and Jenn pushed number four a hundred times in succession. Nothing. She randomly pressed numbers as if trying to poke life into a dead phone. Nothing—until a faint green line darted across the bottom of the screen. “Matt!” she squealed. The shower water kept running so she wrote: Nick?”
A line appeared: H?
Jenn stared at the letter and question mark. They made no sense. She tried to remember what number she had pushed, but wasn’t sure. She wrote: Who did I reach?
The screen turned black. Dead.
Jenn hit Nick's number again, pounding in frantic rhythm. No response. She hit one number after another until the green line returned. She wrote: Anyone there?
A response came back: Who is asking?
Ice prickled up Jenn’s arms. Caller ID would reveal she had Matt’s phone. She slowly wrote:  M. Jensen.
Where R U Mrs. W? popped onto the screen.
Relief flooded through her—someone knew she existed! She wrote the state abbreviation: MT.
U OK?
Yes. Please help me!
The screen went dark. The link was gone. Frantically, she tried again. The link popped up, but was lost before she could contact anyone. Once more it popped up and failed. The next connection held and she wrote: Help!
The screen blinked, but the connection held. A reply came back: Husband home. Searching for you. Are you in Montana?
Jenn wrote: Yes.
Eternity seemed to pass before a reply arrived: Be careful. Jensen is lethal. Wants ransom for you and child. Will kill if provoked. You have gun. Use it. Defend yourself. Kill Jensen. Don’t wound! Kill. Kill. Do it NOW!
Jenn swore under her breath as she rammed the Jeep keys deep inside her pocket. She wrote: It’s night. Where should I go?
Another delay preceded the reply: Will send instructions. Follow carefully to receive them press green phone symbol 3 times. Press 4th time and hold 5 seconds. Instructions will appear on screen. Memorize them. Follow precisely. Don’t reply. Do NOW!
Jenn read the instructions again, making sure she knew them. Once, twice, three times she pressed the green phone button with her heart pounding. She pushed again and held the button down and slowly counted to five, then released it. The screen flashed red three times like hot flames. Startled, she dropped it into her lap, but snatched it back. Random letters and symbols flashed across the screen in ascorbic colors. The screen turned black.
Totally black.
She waited, heart pounding, sweat beading on her forehead. The shower water continued. “Hurry, hurry,” she chanted under her breath.
Nothing. No instructions. Just blackness.
She thumped the phone with the palm of her hand. Nothing. She mentally counted to fifty. Nothing but darkness. No instructions jumped out with the thumps. A soft sound whispered through her brain. She paused and held her breath to hear better. There was no sound. That’s when she realized there had been no soft sound, only the absence of sound. The steady flow of water had ended.
Heart jumping from her chest, Jenn frantically pounded the numbers on the phone. Nothing! The bathroom door creaked open and candlelight poured out. “Still at it, Jenn?” Matt called.
She gulped, dislodging terror from her voice. “Yeah, but—but this phone is a piece of junk. I bet it’s never worked.”
Matt chuckled somewhere behind her.
Slamming the phone onto a cushion she rose. “Your turn. I’m going to bed.”
Matt stood tall, dark and shadowy at the base of the stairs. He reached out and she cowered back. “Keys?” He held his hand out.
Hugging herself, she rubbed her arms for warmth. “I want to keep them.”
“I know.” He snapped his fingers. “I get what I want, remember? Hand them over.”
She dug them from her pocket and thunked them into his palm. She raced up the stairs with his parting words drifting upward: “Sweet dreams.”

End Chapter 34

Good night, ya'll. 
 



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