Wednesday, November 13, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 37

If you're looking for chapter 37 of Secrets at Midnight, you're in the right place!

Running:
I've learned to run with water. Especially in warm weather. And I've learned how I like best to carry it. And I've discovered watering holes (drinking fountains) along my favorite routes. I love surviving.


Writing:
I never dreamed I'd write a "cozy murder" as one of my instructors would call this book. I'd always writtin more pleasant stuff. But over and over again I heard that my romantic chick-lit wasn't going to sell and I needed to venture into hen-lit and cozy mystery/murder. I don't have much stomach for it, really, so I'm surprised that I've written this novel, and that I'm sharing it with you. I hope you enjoy it, because from what the experts say, this is in high demand. Maybe the difference between me and the authors being published are a few things: I keep it clean--your daughter can read it.

 
Sometimes the box is better than the toy, and the cover is better than the book. Sometimes not.



Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 37

Monica's eyes opened when the heavy door creaked open. She blinked at a silhouette. A man stepped inside as the light flipped on and momentarily blinded her. His lips turned upward as he crossed the room in short strides matching his height. He reached out. She hated it when men touched her hair.
“Like gold spun from sunlight,” he reverently said.
A genuine dingy blond, Monica’s color was manufactured in a chemical plant. Enduring many hours in a salon kept the illusion intact—which reminded her, she had an upcoming appointment she had no intention of missing. But many things stood in the way—she was in Bogotá rather than Dallas, thin wires bound her wrists and ankles, the man incarcerating her stood between her and the door, and beyond, an unknown number of armed soldiers patrolled.
“Eyes like the sky on a pleasant day of birdsong,” the man said.
Oh, stop the poetry, she thought. Her eyes were washed-out green. Contact lenses countered nature’s neglect.
The man touched her skin, running his fingers along her cheek, then dropped them to her arm to continue the caress. She remained motionless, but her mind envisioned his neck cracking. She prayed she didn’t have to do it.
The man was summoned and he retreated, locking the door behind him.
The petting zoo is closed now. Monica stared around the windowless cement block chamber. She thanked her good fortune that he'd forgotten to turn out the light, and after many days in darkness she examined what only her fingers had explored.
A cement block bulged—either sloppy workmanship or a loose brick hiding a….
Rising to her feet and carefully balancing herself she baby-stepped her shackled feet to the block and nudged it with her shoulder. It wasn't loose, but she did find something—a rusty nail near her toes. She slid to the floor and retrieved it and began scraping the nail along the wires. The cell filled with notes drawn from a rusty bow on a hellish violin. Her fingers blistered, but soon her hands fell free. Her feet were nearly loose when the door flew open. She shoved her hands behind her back, clutching the lethal weapon.
“Another rat is joining you,” a huge man announced, stepping inside. Fresh blood drizzled from a gaping hole where a tooth had recently lodged. The light snapped off, closing the horrible scene. His giant form exited the doorway and a new silhouette emerged—someone dragging a limp body. With a sickening thud the body landed on its knees before keeling over face first. The door slammed shut and the lock grated. Footsteps retreated.
Without wasting time, Monica resumed plying music from her rusty bow. The last wire popped and she stretched out her legs, then pulled them into a crouch beneath her. “Who are you?” she whispered.
A raspy voice whisper in reply, “Monica?”
Monica lunged forward and grasped the body, cradling Natalie’s head in her lap. “They said you’re dead.” She found wires binding Natalie’s wrists, with sticky moisture oozing around wires holding her ankles.
“No one can kill me.”
With the nail, Monica worked on the shackles.
Natalie sucked in a deep breath and slowly exhaled. “Three guards watch the hall. Two are pure muscle, the other lean and agile. They’re carrying HK MP5’s.”
Monica joked, “Four machine guns would scare me, but three won’t stop us. Thanks for sending the big one to the dentist.” Her mind raced forward to formulate an escape plan—snatch at least one weapon apiece—as the nail continued working the wires.
“Someone defected,” Natalie whispered.
Monica’s nail stopped. “You?”
“If it were, I would have killed you by now. Is it you?”
“No. Let’s find the rat and exterminate it.”
“I'd like nothing better,” Natalie hissed. “My fingernails are ruined, I’ve lost a pair of incredible shoes and my reputation needs defending.”
“Who turned?”
“Washington. They bought him. He’s sending the office false information and they believe him, and why shouldn’t they? He’s so spit-shined clean Marshall licks the ground he walks on. He’s prepared an ambush. Armageddon begins next week.”
“What proof do you have—who informed you?”
Natalie snorted in disgust. “We’re here, thanks to Washington. He’s cleaning house—moving out those closest to him. Me. You. Your husband.”
Monica’s heart raced. “What about Matt?”
“He’s missing.” Natalie paused. The only sound in the cell resonated from the nail. “I have a code, but no password. Washington knows that. I received a transmission from him moments before I was ambushed by a pseudo Mr. R—led to me by Washington.”
Washington—a rat? Monica couldn’t imagine it, but then, hadn’t other squeaky-clean agents fallen?
“He turned you in. I heard you were easy to capture.”
“They lost a few men.”
“I don’t believe you. Blood makes you squeamish.”
“I love living and wanted to keep my wedding ring, so I fought for them. I only lost the ring. I’ll keep fighting. We’ll bring Washington down.”
Natalie’s whispered, “It’s odd how he named us himself—Shadow and Kite. I’m unseen and infallible. You soar above allies and foes. Combined against him, he has no hope. He should have considered that.”
“Where is everyone else?” Monica whispered.
“Pete is dead—executed. I watched the video non-stop for days.”
“Oh, Natalie,” Monica groaned. She paused only long enough to give her friend a quick sympathy hug, then resumed cutting. “Pete was too wonderful to lose. I’m so sorry.”
Natalie’s hands burst free. “I never want to close my eyes again—it’s too real—and if I ever get my sights on the killer, he won’t stand a chance. The people closest to Washington are high on my hit list as well. That cute little wife of his—Jenn at the day care center—is my first target. She’s connected to everything.”
“She’s clueless. Totally innocent.”
“Personally, perhaps, but not her husband. Because of him, I lost Pete to cold-blooded, premeditated murder. I want Washington writhing in pain, begging me to close his eyes for him.”
Monica pulled away. “I can’t release you to do that.”
Natalie lunged and snatched the nail. “It’s ugly out there. Everyone thinks your husband defected. Matt’s missing—with Jenn. You know he once loved her—asked her to marry him, don’t you?”
“Yes,” she whispered, struggling to regain the nail. She grasped it for a brief moment, only to lose it.
“Do you regret freeing me now and losing your weapon?”
Monica lunged, swiping her fingernails toward Natalie’s face, but only raking her shoulder. She grabbed a fist of hair and yanked. “If they think my husband defected, they're idiots. Matt could never defect. He has too much goodness and decency. He's too honest and—and he’s no longer romantically interested in Jenn.”
Natalie broke free and locked Monica’s head in a vise grip. “Listen to yourself—he’s too good and decent to do anything bad—but hasn’t he defected from his religion and his god? Don't tell me he can't dishonor his oath. God, man and country—he’s defected from everything. And you can’t tell me he doesn’t worship Jenn.”
Monica pushed her away. “Finish freeing your feet, then we’ll go for the lock. You can either break out with me, or stay here and rot. I’ve got a house to clean, a husband to rescue and an agent to lock up.”
“I’ll kill the agent to save you some work.”
“I hate blood, remember?”
“Then don’t watch.”
When Natalie’s ankles broke free, Monica grabbed her arm, hauled her to her feet and dragged her toward the door, stealing back the nail in the process. Both froze as a key scraped in the lock. Natalie snatched back the weapon, whispering, “I need this. Blood doesn’t slow me down.”
With fate smiling on Shadow and Kite, Monica tasted the sweetness of pending freedom—wind lifting her wings.

End Chapter 37

 


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