Saturday, November 16, 2013

My Novel: Chapter 63

Chapter 63



Woods in Kentucky



Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 63



The afternoon sun glared off the tarmac in shimmering waves. Jenn clutched her stomach hoping to prevent another revolt. With Katie propped on her hip she briskly walked, not knowing where she headed, but distancing herself from the overcrowded break room where one person after another was destined to die. She dug her cell phone from her purse, flipped it open and punched 9-1-1.
“What is your emergency?” a pleasant voice said.
“I—um—I—I’m not sure,” Jenn stammered. Remembering her gun had recently murdered someone jolted her words to a halt.
“Where are you?” the voice asked.
Glancing over her shoulder at the hangers, above at the brilliant blue sky, and forward toward the stark desert she whispered, “I'm not sure. Somewhere in Texas.”
“What is the emergency?”
The voice asking questions sounded calm and unreal, and her reply sounded contrived. “Someone was shot. His name is Adams. That's all I know about him. He's from Dallas—I think.”
“Someone has been shot?” the mechanical voice asked.
Jenn gulped. “Yes. He’s dead. There are other people, but....”
“Are you in danger?”
“Yes, my baby and I are....” Jenn pulled the phone away from the questions and flipped it shut. What could she say—she was walking away from a murder scene?
Within steps she quickened her pace, then began running. She reached the end of the hangers and found nothing but a heat-blasted desert. She darted around the corner and ran to the next corner and slowed. If she kept going she’d end up right where she’d started—at the break room—except on the outside wall. She halted and leaned against the metal hanger in the shade. Gasping for breath she slid to the parched dirt and huddled with Katie. Together they had a good cry, her daughter matching her sob for sob. She ignored return phone calls from the emergency dispatcher.
Afternoon heat intensified. Still, Jenn sat in the shade, not wishing to go anywhere but home and her easy life back when Nick sold insurance. Hours ticked by with only dust moving on tiny puffs of breeze. She expected Nick to round the corner searching for her, but he never bothered.
Katie grew restless. Jenn turned her loose and she played in the dirt. She tossed pebbles at the metal hanger, giggling when they pinged like musical notes. She eventually wearied and sat on her blanket and ate chips and cookies—depleting the diaper bags goody stash. She drank the last of the juice and started on the water bottle.
The sun lowered and shadows lengthened. Two planes landed and one took off. For a while Jenn wondered if she'd been abandoned—Nick and Matt had flown off without her. She despaired until she remembered Matt’s relentless tracking in the Montana forest. A driven man, he’d do the same among cacti.
Horrible visions rushed through Jenn’s head next—Nick dead and dragged into a hanger. Matt dead—Natalie doing the dragging. But she’d heard no gunshots, although maybe she’d mistaken the noise as Katie’s rock music.
Perhaps Kevin and Mueller were plotting how they’d find her—waiting until dark. Despite the heat, she shivered.
The sun sank. Nothing moved except a wasp and Katie. Darkness crept onto the desert and the stifling heat dissipated. A breeze tickled a nearby thorny shrub. Jenn sipped the last drops Katie had left in the water bottle. She set the empty plastic aside and thought about life and death—how much she wanted to live and how hard it had become.
A gunshot shattered the silence. Jenn gasped and clamped her hands over Katie’s ears. Something had been settled that would determine her future. When the silence following the blast expanded, she snatched Katie up, grabbed the dirty blanket she’d been sitting on and frantically looked for a hiding place.
Nothing.
Trapped between a long wall of airplane hangers and the desert, she had no escape except beneath a thorny shrub. She raced to it and slouched under the low-spreading branches. Almost able to reach out and touch the hangers, she jumped up like a scared jack rabbit and darted to a larger bush further out. Six more times she darted and settled before she cowered beneath a shrub with heavy foliage at least one hundred yards from the hangers. She pulled Katie tightly into her lap and added rattlesnakes and scorpions to her fear list.
As time passed and stars winked overhead, Jenn stopped planning how she’d reform Nick and switched to how she’d manage as a widow. With her husband’s death on her hands—she’d left him in a dangerous situation, after all—she’d never forgive herself. She was certain Curtis had sprung like a lion and had killed him, Natalie had reached the gun before Matt could respond, and Mueller—well, he was probably searching for her.
A plane took off, lights blinking red and white in the ink above her until they disappeared. Quiet returned. A breeze caught dry leaves and rustled them, then died. A cricket chirped. Hot, hungry and parched, she recalled feasting on scorched fish in a drenching downpour next to an icy lake.
An explosion rocked the earth. A blast wave smashed sand and pebbles and scorched heat against her, searing Jenn’s shoulders and arms as she protected Katie. The night lit up as if a thousand dragons belched fire. The horror before her ripped her soul. “Nick!” she screamed. “Nick!” She pulled Katie’s blanket over their heads, leaving only her eyes exposed to witness fire and death licking out where the hanger once stood. She wished it would hurry and devour them, hating thinking of the alternative: wandering aimlessly in the scorched desert until the pounding sun shriveled them into raw bones.
A red light blinked overhead—a beacon of hope—a rescue plane! Jenn rose and waved the blanket. It blinked once more, then exploded, showering doom. Sirens wailed, adding an unearthly scream to hell. From billowing smoke a shadow appeared. Jenn dropped to her knees and curled around Katie, hushing her screams against her shoulder. In the orange glow lighting the night there was no place dark enough for hiding. She pressed her body into the spines, seeking cover. “Oh God, please, don’t let my daughter die,” she whispered. “Not while I’m alive to witness it.” She hushed and waited for death to discover them.
“Jenn! Jenn!” The voice rose above the roar—Nick’s. Not long ago it would have brought relief, but now it stampeded with fear. His rough voice kept calling as he rushed past her, turning every direction, his feet stumbling as he searched. He sank to the earth and pounded the desert with his fists, calling her name.
Jenn slowly rose to meet salvation or doom. “Here,” she whispered, uncertain if she wanted to be found.  Desperate shadows twisting like the flames mirrored on Nick’s bare back. “I’m here,” she called louder.
Nick pulled himself up and stumbled on, and wouldn’t have seen her if she hadn’t shouted, “Nick!” and waved Katie’s blanket above her head. Dirt flipped into her eyes and clouded her vision, but she saw him turn and lunge toward her a moment before she was wrapped in his arms.
      Nick dragged her and Katie back to the hanger—toward death—to join a row of bodies strewn among twisted metal and blood near the flames.

End Chapter 63

My Novel: Chapter 62

Chapter 62



How to write a novel: Start and end, making sure there's good stuff in the middle. Do it wrong and it's like faulty wiring--it won't work. 

I hope you've liked my wiring job so far...


Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 62



Wanting to shift Katie’s weight and lower the gun, Jenn tried to understand the bickering and accusations while maintaining her control. It gave her a pounding headache. “Stop right there,” she said when Matt reached for his laptop.

“Jenn, just point that thing at Kevin's head while I pull up a few things for Natalie,” he said.

It sounded logical. She raised her arm a few inches, but knew if she had to fire, she'd only hit his belt buckle. “I need a chair,” she said to Nick.

Her husband pushed one behind her and scooted a table closer so she could prop her elbow on it. He motioned to Kevin. “Sit down. My wife is tired and if she's going to blow you away, she'd like to be comfortable during the process.”

Kevin sat—very reluctantly—and Jenn nodded toward Mueller. “You too.”

He sat.

Nick motioned for the men to move farther apart and they accommodated him.

Jenn focused on Curtis and Mueller a dozen feet away with a dead man between her and them. Matt and Natalie ignored her as they argued over something on the computer. Nick leaned close and said, “You okay, baby? Need anything?”

She whimpered, “A new life. What am I doing here, anyway?”

“Holding everyone hostage. It's intriguing. I've never seen a woman exert so much control over a bunch of muscle men. You've kept this talent hidden.”

“Do I have control? Look around. Matt is playing computer games with Natalie, Mueller is pretending he’s taking a nap, and Kevin is scheming how he’ll disarm you—or possibly kill me. And there's a....” She nodded in Adams direction.

“That’s not a pretty sight. I’ll take care of it.” He nodded at Kevin. “Curtis, get that man out of here. Put him in the hanger.”

Curtis slowly rose, lifting his hands in surrender to Nick’s gun.

Nick nodded at Mueller. “There's a mop and bucket in the custodian's closet. Take care of things to my wife’s satisfaction.”

Mueller’s eyes had popped opened when Kevin stood. He glanced at Jenn. “Do you mind?”

“No.”

Nick called to Matt, “I'll guard Curtis, you watch Mueller.”

Matt jumped up and grabbed his gun and nodded at Mueller to proceed.

Natalie smiled and turned to face the group. She crossed her long legs and acted like she was at tea with interesting friends.

“Jenn, keep your eye on Natalie,” Nick said. “I've always trusted her, but shoot her if you want. You know better than the rest of us what she thinks of me, and since I haven’t heard her say anything flattering to you, it's entirely your call. I won’t miss her if you kill her.” As he followed Curtis he added. “Watch out—she’ll try to escape. I’m trusting you to not let her.”

Natalie shot Nick an annoyed look, then leaned back in her chair. She carefully studied Jenn. “Mind if I sip some water, Mrs. Washington?”

“Yes. When Nick is back you may resume…” Natalie slowly blinked at her as if bored. “…resume breathing.”

Natalie’s perfect eyebrows arched. “Thank you, Mrs. Washington—for being so generous with water and air.”

Jenn felt stupid. She’d never threatened anyone in her life until recently—and to begin such a lifestyle with a gun—it terrified her. Would she pull the trigger if the gorgeous redhead moved? And she’d never intimidated anyone before—and to begin with something as basic as oxygen? She swore she’d never do it again. She was tempted to back off, but wasn’t sure how to proceed and remain alive when the woman obviously wasn’t concerned about killing someone.

Minutes ticked by as Natalie stared back with a calm, deadly gaze. Jenn knew if she could pop her head open she’d hear a thousand unflattering words about herself. She slowly raised the gun. Natalie’s cheeks twitched and an amused smile escaped. “Yes, everything is stupid, but I have the gun,” Jenn whispered as if she’d read her mind.

Natalie’s face smoothed again, turning blank. “Nick is so…” She shrugged, saying nothing more.

Curiosity burned through Jenn. If Nick were having an affair with the captured fireball, she could pull the trigger without regret. As if reading her thoughts Natalie said, “He’s a good man.”

Jenn’s gun hand shook. Flattery, no matter how hard it had seemed for Natalie to dispense, could not convince her to lower the weapon. “Silence, please. Pretend you’re in time-out.”

Natalie smiled. “Yes, Miss Jenn.” Her lips closed along with her eyes. When she opened her eyes again she appeared to be calculating what she’d do first when time-out ended. Knowing Natalie was a killer—she wondered if she and Katie would survive her scheme.

Matt and Mueller returned, along with Nick and Kevin. Each took their places as if commanded. Jenn felt stupid—she had a gun, but no answers. The day suddenly felt eternally long. The smells of blood mingled with bad cologne and cleaning detergent curdled her stomach. The gun became a hot branding iron in her palm—scorching with guilt. It fell from her grasp. She grabbed her stomach and lurched to her feet. Natalie’s eyes darted to the abandoned weapon as Jenn spun away and raced for the little sink.

When she turned back wiping her mouth, everything had changed. Mueller had his hands in the air, but his feet inched toward the exit. Curtis crouched, ready to spring at Nick’s throat, as lethal as a hunting lion. Natalie’s hand poised motionlessly over Jenn’s gun while Matt held her fingers aloft with the barrel of his weapon creasing her brow. “Back off,” Matt hissed. Natalie’s fingers quivered, but didn’t withdraw.
  Jenn grabbed her diaper bag and purse, clasped Katie tighter and raced from the break room. The door whooshed shut behind her, trapping the scene inside.



End Chapter 62

Many chapters ago I mentioned this novel has 65 chapters. We're close to the end. I hope you're enjoying it.   
 

My Novel: Chapter 61

Chapter 61


I had to throw in another photo of Moab, Utah.


Secrets at Midnight
Leona Palmer Haag
Chapter 61



For the first time since Matthew Willard Jensen had looked at the little bundle of a girl named JennaLynn, he regretted ever meeting her. He wished he'd never been part of her childhood—the part that taught her independence and stamina when the going got tough. Jenn had been raised in the wrong part of town and had seemed to grow up nice despite it—until she had a gun in her hand and the advantage. And the only reason she had the advantage was because she was serious. None of them doubted the girl with the baby in her arms who recklessly waved a gun. Better than most, Matt knew she knew how to use it—not very well, but good enough to get the job started—if not finished.
With lightning speed his brain raced through ways to disarm her. There were plenty. He'd been trained for situations like this. But the biggest problem was Katie. And Jenn. How do you take down a threat you've always loved, and not hurt her and her baby—two people you held in your own arms on the days they were born? But there was another problem: everyone in the circle wanted to disarm Jenn, and probably more than one was willing to kill her.
Matt knew he wasn't the defector, and suspected Nick wasn't, but he had no clue about Natalie or Mueller. Both could be as guilty as sin. Curtis headed his traitor list. He studied his guarded expression.
Mueller received his critique next. He knew next to nothing about the communications tech/agent except that he was fairly new to the office. In less than a year he’d become one of Marshall's right-hand men and worked behind the scenes.
Natalie. He'd worked with her in Miami, but that had been years ago. A lot could have changed.
From their suspicious glares, Matt supposed each of them were sizing up the next agent to determine guilt and allegiance, but one or more already knew who defected. His attention returned to Jenn when she said, “Kevin, you said Natalie was dead, so what is she doing here? How did she escape? Why were you wrong? Or was that part of the plan?”
Curtis cleared his throat. He spoke slowly as if Jenn had comprehension problems. “I sent out a…missing person…alert. I said she might…possibly…be dead. We found the tip of her fingernail. I never said she was dead, I only passed on information we collected.”
“Did you kill her partner?—and don’t treat me like an idiot.”
Curtis gulped. “No, ma’am.”
Matt glanced around the circle. He could see the anger bubbling below Curtis’ cool exterior. If it hadn't been such a critical situation, he would have laughed at the seasoned agent being questioned by a daycare manager with a baby in her arms.
Jenn waved her gun. “Kevin, you arranged for me to leave the hotel in a cleaning cart, right?”
“Yes.”
“I never got to Angels Deli. Why? Did you arrange for my kidnapping too?”
“No. I had a backup plan—a park pavilion. Matt knew the plan.” Kevin turned to face Matt. “What happened, Jensen? You went to the deli and waited, but our man said you ran out. You successfully ditched us and caught up with Mrs. Washington. Explain that, along with a missing million dollars.”
“I smelled a rat.” His finger rose chest high to match Jenn’s gun. “The office seems to be crawling with them. Every transmission I sent you seemed to be intercepted. I sent Mrs. Washington on a safer route to protect her from you, and that cost a lot of money!”
Curtis swore a blue streak. “Me? Correction, Jensen—you ran to protect your own hide! You and Washington defected and are on the run. You saw us closing in.”
Matt angrily shook his head. “How deep is the corruption, Curtis?”
Curtis punched back. “What's happening on the border, Jensen? Where are the guns going? Who is paying for them and who is moving them? What is the next target? We want answers in the office.”
Matt stepped closer to his foe. “You want answers because your private operation was discovered and you need to rescue it. What message did you send Jenn at the cabin? You instructed her to disable the phone and enable the tracking device. Who found us there—or rather, who didn't find us?”
Curtis’ face reddened. “No tracking enabling message was sent from the office. We discovered your position on the satellite system. We sent....” He nudged his foot toward the dead man.
“Adams,” Mueller finished.
Curtis nodded. “Adams took care of it. He sent a team to Montana while he flew to Santa Fe—the other location the satellite detected. We suspected one was only an echo.”
“So we all agree Adams defected,” Nick sarcastically said. “That makes it simple. We walk away with a guilty man we can't hang because Natalie killed him, and we’re left wondering is someone else is equally rotten. I'd rather have a clean slate, so let's find the mole.”
“I want to get out of this crate,” Natalie demanded, popping bubbles as she moved.
Jenn stepped aside. “First, tell me where you got the kid and why.”
Natalie bristled. “Who put you in charge?”
Nick chuckled. “Her weapon. Just answer her, Holtz.”
Natalie glared at Jenn. “I borrowed him from my friend's sister-in-law. His name is Jeremy and he's almost two. I was sent to see if you were in a safe environment at work, and whether we could secure it and protect you and your baby if your husband was ever taken hostage.”
“That sounds good, but is it true?” Jenn asked.
More bubbles popped as Natalie moved. “Obviously you don’t need protection—expect from yourself,” she sarcastically said.
“Maybe you should stay in your special packaging,” Jenn replied.
Natalie leaned back and exaggerated a sigh. “Mrs. Washington, your friend Monica had primary control over at-home safety, but she didn't have a kid and couldn't easily check things out without looking like an over-curious idiot, so she asked me to help her. Nick was doing fine in Colombia, so I came home to assist her, as well as help Pete. He had found something interesting.”
“What?” Matt asked, studying Natalie's face.
“A computer leak from the office. Isn't that your specialty, Mr. Jensen?”
Matt stared angrily at her. “There are no leaks on my end. I keep things sealed tight. Everything is secure and hack-proof.”
Natalie glared back. “Then how did I find it, Mr. Genius? Monica didn't dare go home after I showed it to her. I disappeared too, only to discover a few hours later that I was missing and possibly dead. And Jensen, please explain why my fingernail was found behind Washington’s trash bin when I’ve never set foot within five miles of the place. Why did you call Curtis to back you up? How did he find a fingernail I lost in El Paso while escaping from the infamous Mr. R, or more likely, one of his many impostors? Who collected that piece of evidence and sent it to you—the mole?”
Everyone stared at Matt. “I'm not a defector. I never planted a fingernail.” He paced to Natalie’s prone position and shoved his face close to hers. “No one sent me your fingernail. If there was a leak, someone set me up. And believe me, my wife would never be afraid to come home.”
“That's what they all say,” Curtis sarcastically said.
Matt faced Curtis. “You found the fingernail, or did you plant it?”
Nick waved his gun around the circle. “I’m tired of this. At this rate it will take ten years to solve. Cut out the small talk and get to the meat—who’s double dealing?”
Matt glared at his partner. “I want to know about the fingernail and leak. What kind of leak, Natalie? And why would you say my wife is afraid of me?”
Natalie struggled to stand, bubbles popping. She stepped from the crate, smoothed her skirt and blouse and joined the circle. She briefly raised her hands in surrender to Jenn, then lowered them and pointed one long finger at Matt. “You tell us what kind of leak. Perhaps you should begin with the one that begins: 'Red alert. Agent down. Female.’ It was relayed on June tenth. You do realize the alert first went out on June ninth, only hours before the body appeared behind Washington’s trash, I presume?”
Everyone stared at Natalie.
“No?” She looked around the circle. “None of you received the message?”
Heads shook. Curtis said, “Apparently not.”
Natalie cleared her throat. “Why was I the only one who knew an agent was down before Jenn stepped on someone and I went missing? Next time I’m apprehended should I collect all of my broken fingernails so they’re not placed at a crime scene later?”
Matt stared at Natalie in disbelief. “I never saw the alert. I never sent it. I'm not the computer genius—Adams was. He must have sent it to a select few. Show me the message. I want proof.”
Natalie’s smile hinted superiority. “Where's your laptop?” 

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